(1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers'attention.
(2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilisation.
(3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.
(3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.
(4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.
(4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools.
(5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera
(5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.
(6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief.
(6b) That singer's life was brief and tragic.
(7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.
(8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?
(9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity,
and he likes their silence.
(10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the
nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.
(11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.
(11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.
(12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, in the centre of the dark forest
lived seven dwarfs.
(13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred.
(14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent.
小作文首段经典句型：The line chart/pie chart/flow chart clearly shows/indicates/suggests that...
In conclusion, consumers in Turkey preferred to pour most of their money into both Food/Drinks/Tobacco and Leisure/Education, while the Italians were likely to invest more money in Clothing and Footwear.
A：This figure was approximately 2.5% higher than that spent in Turkey, Spain and Ireland, and 3.6% higher than thatspent in Sweden.
B：It can be seen from the table that consumers spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco accounted for the largest percentagein all five countries listed in the chart.
The graph which describes the trend of the percentage of people who are more than 65 years old in 3 developed countries tells us that the phenomenon of the aging of population has been becoming increasingly severe during the period of a century.
As can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the flutuation of .......
多用who(指人)、which(指物)、that(即可指人也可以指物)，还有一个经典的容易被忽视的定语从句在大作文中可以表达事件发生的原因：即由why引导的固定句型...the reason(s) why...
There may be some reasons why entertainment stars earn high salaries but overall I agree that they are overpaid.
文章中提出观点的好句型，无论是你自己的观点还是文章中原来给出的观点都可以。建议多用that引导的，不容易出错，如：some people think/agree/suggest/insist that...
A growing number of parents believe that being overly dependent on social networking websites only makes their children more isolated in the real world.
The related sectors should take effective measures the moment the problem appeared.
Generally，air will be heavily polluted where there are factories.
As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads.
D.条件状语从句(引导词：if/as long as/providing that/provided that...)
The government will increase its support for public education, provided that such funds can be put to good use.
E.让步状语从句(就是转折关系，引导词：though/although/while/no matter who/where/which/how...)
*While (表示二者对比)some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.
*Even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job.
1 the table shows the changes in the number of ...over the period from...to...这一表格描述了在...年至...年间...数量的变化。
2 the bar chart illustrates that...这个柱状图显示了...
3 the graph provides some interesing data regarding...该图为我们提供了有关...的有趣数据
4 the diagram shows(that)...这个图显示...
5 the pie graph depicts(that)...这个饼图揭示了...
6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of ...这个曲线图描述了...的趋势
7 the figures/statistics show(that)...数据(字)表明...
8 the tree diagram reveals how...这一树状图表明....
9 the data/statistics show (that)...该数据可以这样理解...
10 the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...这些数据资料令我们得出结论...